A very nice game my friend, but just a little bit of advice, the game takes too long to get started, not all who play your game will want to sit down listening to five minutes dialogue straight. It is a GAME, take advantage of the medium and let the player discover the storyline/plot through playing the game, not having to read many lines of dialogue.
Anyway GREAT GAME, pm me when the sequel is out please.
The intro is remedied in the second game in that once you start, you only have to read one line of dialogue before jumping straight into it. That way, like you said, the player can discover the story through playing a bit more.
I'll be sure to PM you, it should hopefully be out before the end of the year. Thanks for playing!
Awesome
There is SO much detail in this game, I can't even imagine how much work this much of taken to make. Well done!
It took a lot. Not just a lot, but a lot a lot a lot.
But Part 2 will be much easier and much quicker to make.
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